Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
There is a certain group of masses spend their
life
to work
in a single company
whereas other folks believe that working with different companies is good. However
, I gravitate that doing a job
in a particular organization for a life
span give more benefits. In this
essay, I will explicate my perspectives on both arguments with suitable examples in the following paragraphs.
To commence with, masses who change their workplace often have short time
benefits like earning handsome amount of money
quicker as compared with the other people
. To clarify my instance, if a person can change his job
for seeking instant earning in his particular work
. To illustrate, a survey conducted by reputed news channel "BBC News" said that there is a 40% of working people
can change their work
only for having handsome earning instantaneously. Although
changing job
helps people
to earn more, it will not give them a chance to represent a board member of the company
which takes time
to earn handsome money
but has a great future. As a result
, people
earn quick money
but it will not have a good future in the end.
On the other side, folk who spends their whole life
for a particular association then
it will give an opportunity to lead the whole organization. As a result
, this
type of person earns money
while enjoying his work
in the same workplace. To exemplify this
, The CEO(Chief Executive of Organization) of association Google Sundar Pichai who has been working for this
company
for more than 20 years, and opts for a well-known position in this
same company
. However
, he can not earn a handsome amount of salary instantly but at a later stage by getting the topmost position of the company
he can get an extreme wage which can not earn by others through changing post frequently. Therefore
, giving your life
-span time
for a company
have great achievement rather than changing job
.
To conclude, I can summarize by saying that one or another way changing job
has good for a shorter period of time
while giving your soul for working in the same company
has a tremendous future in life
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite