You recently bought a camera while travelling overseas. When you got to your destination you discovered that some important items were missing from the box. Write a letter to the local representative of the company. In your letter give details of the camera and where you bought it explain what has happened say what you want him/her to do about it

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Dear Sir, I am writing to express my extreme disappointment with a recent purchase of a Canon 5D camera from your outlet in Kuala Lumpur, on the 20th of April 2020, which was missing its charger from the box. The purchase was for a long-planned family vacation to Thailand. We discovered a missing item only after reaching our destination. Due to a hurried purchase, we did not unbox it

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and there, which has caused

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turmoil. I have attached a receipt for your perusal. Since it is urgent and important that we use the device, I suggest that you may please organize a collection of the charger from your outlet in Thailand. There is one nearby our stay, in Patong, which would be convenient for me. And, it would be really appreciated if

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can be arranged for tomorrow since our vacation ends by the end of

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week. I hope you consider

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suggestion and organize the same

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. Yours sincerely, Alex

ash.fuji2018Thu Apr 22 2021

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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7 paragraphs

164 words

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