As a result of tourism and the increasing number of people travelling, there is a growing demand for more flights. What problems does this have on the environment? What measures could be taken to solve the problems?

The 21st century is the century of technological discoveries and
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development. Nowadays technology has evolved so well that allows
people
to dive into the deepest points and reach even other planets but what are the consequences to
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they cause.
This
essay going to discuss possible environmental issues that cause
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.
Airplanes
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usually use fuel that
emit
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into the atmosphere a huge amount of carbon dioxide and water
vapor
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, nitrogen oxides and etc. These emissions contribute to an increase in Global Warming because all these components
people
consider as greenhouse
gases
.
Moreover
,
airplanes
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emit a huge amount of greenhouse
gases
as well as exhaust fumes and toxic
gases
which contaminate the air.
In addition
, toxic
gases
could be the reason
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another catastrophic event like acid rain that in his turn cause soil pollution. Hopefully, humanity can undertake some actions that could alleviate or even destroy the root problem.
For example
, switching from fuel energy to alternative energy like
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or even hydrogen fuel that more environment friendly. Another
one
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step should be connecting
whole
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world with
high speed
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rail networks to discourage
people
from taking domestic flights. The
last
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way to solve
problem
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the problem
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is reducing or even erasing plastic, sorting wastes or using more public transports or at least bicycles. To conclude, it is clear that humans face with
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number of problems connected with
growing
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a growing
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number of flights and of course for every issue
people
can find
solution
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. We live in
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world where technology
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human kind
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to travel even
at
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space so only
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will tell is it
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or blessing. If it is
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, it will lead to
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future. If it is
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, it will be only beginning for our
disappear
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.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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