In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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many countries have a regulated

salary

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structure which is expected to create a balance in the expenditures of the

government

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it has been discovered that a small number of

people

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receive extremely high salaries .

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doesn’t create a balance if they are working for the

government

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of a state or

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. A lot of these individuals are found to be political appointees in my

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and they are not working

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the other

citizens

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making them highly rated .They are given preferential treatment while the vast population are on a

salary

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scale and usually write examinations to move to the

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grade in order for their salaries to be raised. A lot of

citizens

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are not supporting the

government

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by pushing back and holding rallies to enlighten the

people

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and create awareness on the injustice being meted out to them .others believe that a regulated

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structure will create equality among the

citizens

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and would make things easier for the

work force

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workforce

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in terms of provision of great opportunities for their family members. My opinion on

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issue is that the

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structure should be regulated , applied to every citizen of the

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,and create a

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,conducive working environment.A good example is

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way

Government

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establishments in my

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is believed to be a place where lazy

people

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go to work and there is no passion in carrying out their duties,

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, the

citizens

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believe that the

government

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is being partial. A typical example is the politically appointed public

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holders who are paid in millions to just sit,hold meetings and pass bills which is the national assembly members.I

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believe

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belive

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believe

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those

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office holders

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do not possess the qualification

top

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possess

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such

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office

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.If the

salary

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is regulated to the level of public

office

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holders, a lot of qualified

people

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will be willing to work for

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government

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the government

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