In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Although

many countries have a regulated

salary

structure which is expected to create a balance in the expenditures of the

government

but

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it has been discovered that a small number of

people

receive extremely high salaries .

This

doesn’t create a balance if they are working for the

government

of a state or

country

. A lot of these individuals are found to be political appointees in my

country

and they are not working

like

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the other

citizens

thus

making them highly rated .They are given preferential treatment while the vast population are on a

salary

scale and usually write examinations to move to the

next

grade in order for their salaries to be raised. A lot of

citizens

are not supporting the

government

by pushing back and holding rallies to enlighten the

people

and create awareness on the injustice being meted out to them .others believe that a regulated

salary

structure will create equality among the

citizens

and would make things easier for the

work force

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in terms of provision of great opportunities for their family members. My opinion on

this

issue is that the

salary

structure should be regulated , applied to every citizen of the

country

,and create a

stress free

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,conducive working environment.A good example is

the

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way

Government

establishments in my

country

is believed to be a place where lazy

people

go to work and there is no passion in carrying out their duties,

however

, the

citizens

believe that the

government

is being partial. A typical example is the politically appointed public

office

holders who are paid in millions to just sit,hold meetings and pass bills which is the national assembly members.I

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belive

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believe

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those

office holders

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do not possess the qualification

top

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possess

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such

office

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.If the

salary

is regulated to the level of public

office

holders, a lot of qualified

people

will be willing to work for

government

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.