Some people believe that not all criminals should be kept in prison but that some of them should be allowed to do unpaid work to help the community do you agree or disagree?

There is a certain group of persons who reckons that rather than deploying culprits into a prison, a few of them should be given an opportunity to do volunteering
work
for aiding
society
. I am in accord with the
second
statement where offenders would be allowed to do the social
work
for the community. I will illustrate my perspectives with suitable examples in the following paragraphs.
To begin
with,
although
delinquents are useless to
society
because of their deeds which have an adverse effect on us, in some
cases
the situation becomes worst,
hence
the masses can not resist them from committing a crime. Sometimes, these people can be changed by guiding them to do some social actions towards the
society
as doing charity
work
. For illustration, in our city, Ahmedabad, a group of lawbreakers do the cleaning works at public places over the weekends.
Moreover
,
this
type of development can be diminished the delinquency of the criminals and in some
cases
, they can think twice before committing the crimes again.
As a result
, by taking
such
actions not only change the nature of criminal but
also
helps the
society
in a broader way.
Furthermore
, putting offenders like pocket pickers, theifs, etc. into prison can not beneficial for
society
as well as the government,
thus
such
culprits do not understand the impact of the crime which they have done earlier. But, government take appropriate actions against them
such
as
instead
of putting them into prison, allowing them to do some educational
work
that can be helpful to
society
.
For example
, Kiran Bedi, a
first
lady IPS(Indian Police Services) officer who guided more than 100 criminals and under her guidance, became social activists to support the government school's students in their educations. As a consequence, the number of criminal
cases
reduced in the Tihar district and the literacy rate of children increase drastically due to
such
charitable's
work
done by the lawbreakers. To conclude, Every criminal is not bad for
society
,
hence
putting all of them in a lockup which does not an excellent idea.
However
, in some
cases
, a criminal should be given a chance to
work
for volunteering to the
society
which indeed a fruitful outcome towards reducing the crime from the
society
.
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