Essay topics: Your next-door neighbor likes to listen to music late at night. Because of the loud music, you often lose sleep. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter Describe the situation Explain the problem it is causing you Offer at least one solution

Dear
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Kornienko, I am writing to express my discontent with my neighbour who is living above me.Unfortunately, he likes to listen to loud music at midnight.
Firstly
, I think that
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is a new neighbour
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because
few
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months ago in that flat lived a nice family, which were noiseless and it was
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to have
such
neighbours. I noticed that
this
new man is young and he is keen on having parties with
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laud
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music, which is annoying.You can understand my frustration when
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and my wife with 2 years old daughters are trying to sleep and hear a bass coming from his room and quite noisy laughings.
Moreover
,
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of sleep can cause headaches which I have, because of that guy.
Secondly
, I would like to suggest you
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go to his apartment.Talk to him about turning off his speakers after 6 o'clock and give
first
and
last
warning.
Otherwise
, he
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will have to be evicted. I am looking forward to hearing from you that you have taken
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steps to deal with
this
problem to maintain
reputation
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and quality of your building company. Yours faithfully, Saveliy
Dychenko
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Dyachenko
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