Essay topics: Your next-door neighbor likes to listen to music late at night. Because of the loud music, you often lose sleep. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter Describe the situation Explain the problem it is causing you Offer at least one solution

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Kornienko, I am writing to express my discontent with my neighbour who is living above me.Unfortunately, he likes to listen to loud music at midnight.

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, I think that

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is a new neighbour

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months ago in that flat lived a nice family, which were noiseless and it was

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neighbours. I noticed that

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new man is young and he is keen on having parties with

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music, which is annoying.You can understand my frustration when

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and my wife with 2 years old daughters are trying to sleep and hear a bass coming from his room and quite noisy laughings.

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of sleep can cause headaches which I have, because of that guy.

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, I would like to suggest you

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go to his apartment.Talk to him about turning off his speakers after 6 o'clock and give

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warning.

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will have to be evicted. I am looking forward to hearing from you that you have taken

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and quality of your building company. Yours faithfully, Saveliy

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Dyachenko

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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7 paragraphs

188 words

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