In recent years, many small local shops have closed because consumers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?

Due to

constructions

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the constructions

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of huge shopping

malls

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,malls

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people tend to shop from these

centres

instead

of choosing tiny grocery

stores

and many small scale

stores

are badly affected owing to

this

trend. In my

opinion

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this

is

a

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positive

development

progress.

Initially

,

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essay will discuss more employment opportunities in these

centres

and

then

availability

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the availability

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of international brands.

To begin

with, the foremost positive impact of the big shopping

centres

is that number of jobless people hired by these

stores

.

There

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people can get

job

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a job

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in various categories

such

as security, cleaners and customers care.

As a result

, it helps to reduce

the

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unemployment from the globe.

For instance

, a survey conducted recently by BBC News

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revealed that 27% of the world illiterate workless population are working in vast shopping

stores

and earning income to survive in

this

world.

Therefore

, unemployment has been reducing gradually by various large shopping malls.

Besides

, the

second

positive

development

of

this

trend is that our society became more

consumerism

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. Customers are able to obtain their

favorite

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favourite

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brands from these

stores

which are not possible to get through small shops.

Consequently

, they can consume those things which are only consumed by foreigners.

For example

, several malls have branded clothing

stores

such

as Nike,

addidas

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Adidas

Addidas

or Gucci and

young

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the young

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generation prefer to wear these types

clothes

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of clothes

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due to easy accessibility through big shopping

centres

.

Hence

, these complexes are satisfying the

consumers

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consumer's

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needs which is the essential motto of

this

development

. To conclude,

this

essay supports the idea that there are more positive elements than negative in the terms of getting jobs and fulfilling consumers requirement with imported items and these both things are difficult to provide by small shops.

Thus

, I consider

this

to be a positive

development

overall.