Some governments have banned smoking in all public places. Do agree or disagree?

Health is wealth. smoking injuries health. Nowadays most people
is
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addicted
by
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smoking habits. Some governments
takes
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measure step to reduce
this
ratio in different ways
such
as smoking is strictly restricted in all public places.
This
could
seen
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that everywhere which is
common place
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. I strongly agree with
this
statement. Because
this
is the positive
suituation
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situation
to the world.
To begin
with, there are many reasons to encourage
this
statement.
Firstly
, a few governments already strictly follow the rules of smoking is banned in
public
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a public
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area.
Therefore
they can reduce the disease
such
as lung cancer. Because passive
smoker
are
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heavily affected by
direct
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the direct
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smoker
.
This
means
first
-hand
smoker
exhales
cigrate
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cigarette
smoke
but
second
-hand
smoker
inhale the
cigrate
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cigarette
citrate
smoke
.
Hence
, they are directly affected by
smoke
without any reason.
Therefore
,
ministry
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should provide the resolution of banned.
For example
,
recent
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survey clearly said that
,
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more than 70% of young people
is
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addicted
of
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to
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smoking
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the smoking
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habit.
Moreover
, a few
government
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governments
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is taken alternative measure of
smoking
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a smoking
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person is smoked without any hindrance in
public
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a public
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place which is
smoking
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the smoking
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zone. We can see that in many places.
This
idea
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very useful for
continueosly
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continuously
smoke
user. To conclude, a
health
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healthy
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nation only will develop. More
devloped
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developed
countries
are strictly follow
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are strictly following
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the rules of smoking is banned in
whole
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the whole
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public together
such
as hospital, school road, petrol station, bank and etc. Their
counry
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country
civilians are
also
respected to follow.
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