As compared to the past people today are choosing to have fewer children than their parents and grandparents. Describe some of the problems that having fewer children can cause and suggest at least one possible solution.

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compared to the previous generations.

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fact might bring a few problems for both, the country and the family.

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, the government may encourage people to have more offspring in future. There are some issues which might occur because of reducing the number of

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families

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, some nations may significantly decrease in population.

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, we can see

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a tendency in Ukraine now when the number of yearly deaths far more exceed the count of newborn

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, the Ukrainian nation becomes older each year.

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, the drawback for parents in having fewer

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is that they will be less secure in their old age.

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, the possibility of being protected and being not alone is raised much higher when parents have more

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a large family has tighter bones compared with a family with a few

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. I believe that those problems might be solved on the governmental level. Each country’s government, where there is a problem with a growing population, ought to create a program for giving support to all

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to encourage them to have more

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has sense because people who see how the government’s policy works will be sure in their future.

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, the higher parent’s stability and the confidence in the future are the higher childbirth will be.

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, the benefits for society and

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will be noticeable in a short period of time. In conclusion, in spite of the fact that in present years we can see that generally there are fewer

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than it was before,

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issue might be handled by the government.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

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