Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It has been argued that some
information
is too significant as well as confidential to share freely, however
, others believe that, as much as details
should be given in scientific research, business, altogether with the academic world. This
essay will substantiate both views in the following paragraph with relevant examples.
There are numerous reasons that individuals should not have to share valuable information
openly with anybody. Firstly
, important information
such
as password, documents, other property details
, monet and so on always keep these details
in your mind or put somewhere a
safe place like a locker. There are various changes that people could Change preposition
in a
caught
in threats, hacking or other massive crimes Change the verb form
catch
such
as murderd
, or robbery. Correct your spelling
murder
murdered
For instance
, few
months ago there Change the article
a few
were
a survey Change the verb form
was
coundected
by Correct your spelling
conducted
india
of Change the capitalization
India
government
of Add an article
the government
crime
, that gives Add an article
a crime
information
about all the crime
done throughout the year and mostly crimes attemted
by relatives or within friend circle of that person. Correct your spelling
attempted
hence
, the result of the india
government of Change the capitalization
India
Indian
crime
shows that 58% of crime
made because of the provided infromation
. Correct your spelling
information
In addition
, there was a
news of robbery including with murder of the 'Remove the article
apply
sharma's
family'. Change the capitalization
Sharma's
This
gives the detals
of that Correct your spelling
details
crime
, a wowen
of that family tells every Correct your spelling
women
woman
samll
Correct your spelling
small
details
to her sister and her sister share that details
with his husband, one day because of the financial issue of that sister house sisters husbend
made Correct your spelling
husband
this
murderd
to rob everything.
Correct your spelling
murder
murdered
On the other hand
, in scientific research, business and academic nation, knowledge
is a key and it plays a vital role in individuals
life. More you have Add an article
an individuals
the individuals
knowledge
about perticular
topic or a subject that helps to keep up with Correct your spelling
particular
world
. Add an article
the world
For example
, in schools, universities, or colleges teachers elaborate every topic to their students to clear their concept or a
doubt and that Remove the article
apply
also
helps students to get an idea of that chapeter
or matter of the content. Correct your spelling
chapter
Besides
, many exams scores depend on individuals knowledge
like as
Gmat it is an exam of general Change preposition
apply
knowledge
based on all the topics such
as maths, science, language topic and you name it.
To conclude, considering above mentioned points it is evident that, always keep essential details
with you. In my opinion, masses
must have an idea of which Correct article usage
the masses
information
is crucial to talk about and which is necessary to be discuss
.Change the verb form
be discussed
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