Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It has been argued that some
information
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is too significant as well as confidential to share freely,
however
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, others believe that, as much as
details
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should be given in scientific research, business, altogether with the academic world.
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essay will substantiate both views in the following paragraph with relevant examples. There are numerous reasons that individuals should not have to share valuable
information
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openly with anybody.
Firstly
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, important
information
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such
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as password, documents, other property
details
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, monet and so on always keep these
details
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in your mind or put somewhere
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safe place like a locker. There are various changes that people could
caught
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catch
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in threats, hacking or other massive crimes
such
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as
murderd
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murder
murdered
, or robbery.
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,
few
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a few
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months ago there
were
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a survey
coundected
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conducted
by
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India
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of
government
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the government
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of
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crime
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a crime
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, that gives
information
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about all the
crime
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done throughout the year and mostly crimes
attemted
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attempted
by relatives or within friend circle of that person.
hence
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, the result of the
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India
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government of
crime
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shows that 58% of
crime
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made because of the provided
infromation
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information
.
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, there was
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news of robbery including with murder of the '
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family'.
This
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gives the
detals
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details
of that
crime
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, a
wowen
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women
woman
of that family tells every
samll
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small
details
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to her sister and her sister share that
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with his husband, one day because of the financial issue of that sister house sisters
husbend
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husband
made
this
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murderd
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murder
murdered
to rob everything.
On the other hand
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, in scientific research, business and academic nation,
knowledge
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is a key and it plays a vital role in
individuals
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an individuals
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life. More you have
knowledge
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about
perticular
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particular
topic or a subject that helps to keep up with
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the world
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.
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, in schools, universities, or colleges teachers elaborate every topic to their students to clear their concept or
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doubt and that
also
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helps students to get an idea of that
chapeter
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chapter
or matter of the content.
Besides
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, many exams scores depend on individuals
knowledge
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like
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Gmat it is an exam of general
knowledge
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based on all the topics
such
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as maths, science, language topic and you name it. To conclude, considering above mentioned points it is evident that, always keep essential
details
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with you. In my opinion,
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the masses
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must have an idea of which
information
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is crucial to talk about and which is necessary to
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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