Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,
Internet
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is a useful way to get
earliest
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news
.
However
,some people say that newspapers
wil
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will
continue the most relevant
news
outlets.I totally disagree with
this
view
Firstly
, the
Internet
is able to provide up-to-the-minute
news
.I can connect to the
internet
and surf the latest
news
if I have a
smart phone
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or laptop on hand.
Secondly
,
Internet
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is
convinence
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convenience
and easy to access.So more and more people will come to rely on the
internet
as their
news
source.
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the other hand ,
newspaper
have
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the
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drawbacks.It costs cost – falling circulation.
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, American
newspaper
have
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now introduced online version alongside their printed
newspaper
in order to arrest
this
trend.Another
disadvantages
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of
newspaper
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the newspaper
a newspaper
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is
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the amount of
consumed
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and environmental awareness.Because
newspaper
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is made of wood so we have to cut lots of trees to make
newspaper
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the newspaper
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.
Besides
, The cost of one
newspaper
is not big;
however
, to update information around us
everyday
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, you need to buy at least one
newspaper
per day, so that makes the total cost for buying
newspaper
everyday
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In
conclusion
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I disagree with the idea that
newspaper
will not stop being the most crucial source of
news
and more and more people will use the
Internet
to get the latest
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news
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  • reliable
  • credible
  • focused
  • immersive
  • tangibility
  • tradition
  • access
  • digital devices
  • demographics
  • older generation
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