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Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #news #internet #newspapers #source
Many
people
 say that
newspaper
 still plays a central role in transmitting information. Personally, i am disagreement with
this
 idea. Fistly, Internet gains popularity on account of its convenience.With diversity in many fields and up-to-the-minute, it is
second
 to none.
Moreover
, it is accessible by a huge number of
people
, according to Gizmochina, the number of smartphone users globally in 2020 will be 5.22 billion, accounting for 66% of the world's population.
Secondly
, Internet helps us access information easily. It describes truely and exacly the event by its modern functions: the sound, the image, ...., helps readers get information easier.
On the other hand
, one big minus of reading
newspaper
 is its cost.
For example
, suppose the cost of
newspaper
 is 2$,many a little makes a mickle. the total you must pay is at least 730$, yes, only for reading. It becomes obstacles to many
people
.
In addition
, we all know that
newspaper
 is polluted the environment. If we agree with
this
 reading, there will be more printing factory and more cutting trees, and it goes against the current trend: “Save the environment! ” In conclusion,
newspaper
 will no longer be the dominant in means of media. With wonderful convenience,Internet will become a great choose with
people
 in the future.
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  • reliable
  • credible
  • focused
  • immersive
  • tangibility
  • tradition
  • access
  • digital devices
  • demographics
  • older generation
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