More and more people do their shopping on internet. Discuss advantages and disadvantages and give your opinion

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At present many
people
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tend to purchase
things
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on
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apply
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online like flight tickets, books and required groceries which created online shopping more trending and popular with day to day life. Each coin has two sides ,
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similarly
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internet shopping has its own pros and cons.
Firstly
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, there are many advantages due to online shopping as we don't need to travel to get
things
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which ultimately saves our time.
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, During
this
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pandemic of covid-19 , many
people
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couldn't go out
get
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their
things
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due to social distancing. Online Shopping
have
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helped a lot to get
things
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door
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to door including medicines.
Secondly
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,
This
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online shopping has created employment for many
people
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who are needed with
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a minimum
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set of educational requirements.
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, there are few disadvantages. We will not be able to see
quality
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the quality
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of
products
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the products
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we buy. Some times
people
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sent damaged
peice
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piece
and few don't even deliver the product.
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, we have many
people
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complaining in
review
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a review
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that they have received a
damanged
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damaged
product and some upload a video that product was not delivered
instead
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they have delivered only
out
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outbox
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box
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the box
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. But all
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this
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cases can be taken care
by
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of by
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support
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team and get
things
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by
replacing
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themreplacing
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. In conclusion, in my
opinion
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,opinion
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we have more benefits
with
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from
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internet shopping which makes our
lifes
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lives
life
life's
easy and better.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • E-commerce
  • Consumer behavior
  • Virtual marketplace
  • Cybersecurity
  • Digital footprint
  • Return policy
  • Comparison shopping
  • Customer reviews
  • Retail therapy
  • Logistics
  • User interface
  • Payment gateway
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