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A road near your home is damaged. Write a letter to the council of your city/town to complain about it. In your letter: - tell them who you are and where you live - explain the nature of your complaint - say what you would like them to do about it

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Dear Councilor, I'm writing
this
 email regards my concerns about
road
damage
 near my area. I'm an international student and living in
this
 town for over two years. In the
last
 few months, I have noticed that there is a lot of
damage
 on the
road
 which affects the people who travel daily for work, school and college. In recent times, small accidents have occurred on the same
road
due to
damage
. I recommend taking immediate action and
also
 suggest some plans to improve the
road
 by constructing the
road
,
regular
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and regular
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 maintenance checks. By following those plans, it will improve the
damage
 to the
road
. Looking forward to the days to repair the damaged
road
. Since winter is coming, kindly take the necessary action as soon as possible. Thank you for your time and consideration Thanks Dhivya Ravi
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coherence cohesion
Consider breaking down the suggestions into separate sentences or points for clarity.
task achievement
Ensure that your role as an international student and your living situation are clearly linked to the issue at hand.
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The letter maintains a polite and formal tone appropriate for addressing a council.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriately structured, giving the letter a formal feel.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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