In a number of countries, some people think it’s necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In
this
modern world, few countries people
have opined about railway
lines
that it could be vital to invest huge amount on developing tremendously high-speed trains within the city and others believe, money
must be invested on upgrading old public transport
. In my opinion, both public transport
and trains have their own benefits but railways are eco-friendly and cost effective
. Add a hyphen
cost-effective
This
essay will substantiate both views in the following paragraph with relevant examples.
There are numerous reasons that putting money
on constructing rapid railway
lines
within the cities will help the nation to an economic boom. Firstly
, railways are eco-friendly and because of this
we able to cope up with pollution. For instance
, if the regime of the country will look into expanding railway
lines
inside the city will help people
to save money
on travelling as we all know as compared to other transport
facility subways are more affordable and it is also
beneficial for travel to short journey. Take an example of, metro
. The survey conducted by government
of Add an article
the government
india
in 2019 that with a year of lunch of the Change the capitalization
India
metro
, masses travelled excessively. Besides
, the result was shocking they predicted, Correct your spelling
beginning
beggining
of six Correct article usage
the beggining
month
of the Change to a plural noun
months
metro
only 50% masses would travel but it turns out 80% people
travelled by Change preposition
of people
metro
. Metros are safe, extremely rapid and good in the frequency because of this
people
would love to travel by tube and also
it is not deniable that, monorails are more budget friendly
.
On the Add a hyphen
budget-friendly
othet
hand, some Correct your spelling
other
people
argued about spend
extra Add the particle
to spend
money
on existing public transport
. It is not neglectable that public transport
are
good for Change the verb form
is
people
for short journeys and it is more frequently available but it charged to
much. If the Replace the word
too
administry
of the country would Correct your spelling
ministry
administer
thought
about upgrading public Change the verb form
think
be thought
transport
than
not only Correct your spelling
then
indivialus
have to face Correct your spelling
individuals
trafic
jam issue but Correct your spelling
traffic
also
, they have to deal with massive air pollution problems. In addition
, the other side of public transport
is it would be more costly as compared to all the aspects such
as,
petrol, gas, tax you name it, every necessary thing will increasing in rates. Remove the comma
apply
Nevertheless
, by improving public transport
we might have face
extreme difficulties.
To conclude, considering above mentioned point it is evident that, eco-friendly travel is always better for any nation. In my opinion, the government must spend Change the verb form
faced
money
on constructing railway
lines
in cities that will improve the growth of economy
of the country and would not bring any pollution and traffic problems.Add an article
the economy
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