In a number of countries, some people think it’s necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In
this
modern world, few countries
people
have opined about
railway
lines
that it could be vital to invest huge amount on developing tremendously high-speed trains within the city and others believe,
money
must be invested on upgrading old public
transport
. In my opinion, both public
transport
and trains have their own benefits but railways are eco-friendly and
cost effective
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.
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essay will substantiate both views in the following paragraph with relevant examples. There are numerous reasons that putting
money
on constructing rapid
railway
lines
within the cities will help the nation to an economic boom.
Firstly
, railways are eco-friendly and because of
this
we able to cope up with pollution.
For instance
, if the regime of the country will look into expanding
railway
lines
inside the city will help
people
to save
money
on travelling as we all know as compared to other
transport
facility subways are more affordable and it is
also
beneficial for travel to short journey. Take an example of,
metro
. The survey conducted by
government
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the government
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of
india
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India
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in 2019 that with a year of lunch of the
metro
, masses travelled excessively.
Besides
, the result was shocking they predicted,
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beginning
beggining
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of six
month
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of the
metro
only 50% masses would travel but it turns out 80%
people
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of people
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travelled by
metro
. Metros are safe, extremely rapid and good in the frequency because of
this
people
would love to travel by tube and
also
it is not deniable that, monorails are more
budget friendly
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. On the
othet
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other
hand, some
people
argued about
spend
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to spend
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extra
money
on existing public
transport
. It is not neglectable that public
transport
are
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is
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good for
people
for short journeys and it is more frequently available but it charged
to
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much. If the
administry
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ministry
administer
of the country would
thought
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about upgrading public
transport
than
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then
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not only
indivialus
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individuals
have to face
trafic
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traffic
jam issue but
also
, they have to deal with massive air pollution problems.
In addition
, the other side of public
transport
is it would be more costly as compared to all the aspects
such
as
,
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petrol, gas, tax you name it, every necessary thing will increasing in rates.
Nevertheless
, by improving public
transport
we might have
face
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extreme difficulties. To conclude, considering above mentioned point it is evident that, eco-friendly travel is always better for any nation. In my opinion, the government must spend
money
on constructing
railway
lines
in cities that will improve the growth of
economy
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the economy
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of the country and would not bring any pollution and traffic problems.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • investment
  • urban mobility
  • commuters
  • sustainable
  • environmentally friendly
  • accessibility
  • rejuvenate
  • cost-effective
  • traffic congestion
  • economic sustainability
  • tourism
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