the money spent on space research has brought enormous benefits to mankind,but it could be more specifically applied. How far do you agree?

We are living in the modern age

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era,where a lot of money is spent by the

government

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space research for enormous benefits for humankind. Whereas

this

money

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can

also

be used for other important purposes.

First

of all, It enhances the knowledge of people as like as a boom.Now these days, folks can easily know about the exact location of anything.

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, police used Satelite for tracking the location of criminals, which is only possible because of GPS systems that are a gift from space research.

However

, it will

also

cost too much for sending a satellite into the sky,

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is the wastage of money and natural resources.

Secondly

, people can

also

find about the weather on the internet or any other form of news.

As a result

of

this

, in the time of natural disasters, either it is

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or tornado, people could be saved from the troubles. To illustrate it,

last

year in India ,due to a weather report , a danger alert had announced by the

government

, because of

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everybody who lives near the danger alert area , are saved by the

government

.

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, if

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use

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fund on hospitals and schools that would be more beneficial for the public as well as for the

government

. In conclusion, Acess to everything should be bad,whether no wonder space research has so many benefits but we cannot underestimate the wastage of wealth and patrol.