In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by international fast foods. This is having a negative effect on both families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Nowadays, fast

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from other countries is taking precedence over the traditional

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we used to have. Some argue that

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is having a bad effect on families as well as society as a whole. I do not agree with

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an argument as there are both negatives and positives associated with these changes in

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habits. With the tremendous increase in globalization over the years, the

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that we eat is not limited to traditional

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as we have more and more variety of global

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available at our behest. There has been a huge surge in the number of

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franchise that has opened in recent years.

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, Mcdonalds, the American burger restaurant chain is now spread across the

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and have their stores in almost every area of the

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, these days youngsters prefer international fast

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over staple

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of their region.

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, Indian youngsters prefer an American burger or an Italian pizza over the staple diet of rice or wheat. There are some positives associated with

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as, choice of the variety of

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has increased,

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, as these

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are available across the

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, a person travelling to some other country won't face difficulties in finding a familiar meal in any part of the

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, the local

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for India and Germany is very different and yet due to the availability of fast

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joints, it is possible to have a filling meal even in remote areas.

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shift in

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habits is causing the decline and extinction of many cultural or traditional

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, some junk

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is unhealthy and is causing health problems like obesity across the

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, India is famous for spices and various types of herbs but is seeing a decline in consumption due to the advent of global

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choices. In conclusion,

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, there are a few negative effects of the rapid increase in consumption of fast

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over traditional meals, yet, positives

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as easy and cheap availability all over the

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the disadvantages.

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Topic Vocabulary:

cultural identity
heritage
obesity
diabetes
globalization
nutrient-rich
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local cuisine
fast food chains
convenience
processed ingredients
sustainability
culinary traditions
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In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by international fast foods. This is having a negative effect on both families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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