Television dominates the free-time for too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others. Do you agree or disagree? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Since the advent of television, it has gone through a revolutionary change, at

first

, it was used as a medium for audiovisual news and entertainment at a certain

time

of the day only. Nowadays, people are all the

time

glued on their TV Screens sparing no

time

for any physical activity and social interaction with other people. I completely agree, the main reason behind

this

situation is unchecked viewing of television to kill

time

.

This

essay will analyze the reasons causing

this

phenomenon in the below paragraphs. To commence with, The main reason that

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to a drastic change in peoples mentality on television viewing is binge-worthy shows and movies, which keeps the

person

interested in the story for a longer period of

time

with tactics of delaying the climax and suddenly twisting the plot.

As a result

, making

person

time

worthwhile. At the same ,

time

such

serials sow the seed of procrastination in

person

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mind creating false notions and confusion on priorities.

For example

, Game of Thrones garnered a million views final episode on a streaming site. a number of experts say more than a million hours of manpower was wasted when that final episode streamed. That many hours could have used productively by the fans of the show.

Secondly

, Some video channels create clickbait videos which

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has

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seduce the

person

to stream their content, which eventually creates no value in the

person

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life and

therefore

, waste

time

only. Recent research has shown that excessive streaming can reduce the attention span of an individual hampering their learning capabilities. In Conclusion, I firmly believe that excessive TV watching is the main culprit causing making people

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a sedentary lifestyle and adopting anti-social behaviour. Some mitigation and rehabilitation plan should be in place to control

this

epidemic.