More and more people want to own items, such as cars, clothing and other things, that are made by famous brands. What are the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
The noun phrase better quality seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It appears that much needed is missing a hyphen. Consider adding the hyphen(s).
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