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Some people think that a person can never understand a culture of the country unless they speak the language. Do you agree with this opinion?

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It is believed by some people that foreign cultures can only be fully comprehended if the
language
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 of the locals is learned. I personally think that the ability to speak the
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 may knock barriers down, but it is not enough. It is undeniable that much of some
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's culture is intricately related to the
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 spoken in the place, and that may
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 reflect on how its citizens behave. By learning a
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, one could
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 less struggling to insert themselves into a
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's society and somehow feel much more like a citizen.
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, it allows them to get better jobs, make use of multiple services, and even
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understand how the nation culturally works at some point
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Although
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 learning the
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 spoken in
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 specific
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 is of paramount importance for anyone who desires to live overseas, it is
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 relevant to highlight that it will not solve all cultural differences a person might face after his/her arrival. And that happens due to the fact that culture may have
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 influenced by a myriad of variables,
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 as the local history and the weather.
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, the province of Québec, which is a francophone Canadian province, has its own identity and a separatist movement, while New Brunswick (where French is spoken as well) see
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 as
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. Those who once migrated to the former usually report how challenging their
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experiences
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 knew the
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, those who immigrated to the latter say their insertion
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 the local society
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 easier and felt people warmer. In a nutshell, I believe that speaking the local
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 is essential to anyone who intends to go or live in another
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.
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, it will not prevent people from facing difficulties when it comes to adaptation.
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