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Full-time university students should spend a lot of time studying, but it is essential to be involved in other activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people argue that participation in extra-curricular events is indispensable to
students
 who study full-time in tertiary education. I believe
this
 phenomenon prepare young scholars better (to) for future challenges. Club activities are the most popular for
university
 attendees
besides
 their major subjects.
First
 and foremost, societies create an environment for like-minded youngsters to work as a team towards their mutual goal.
This
 entails continuous discussion and communication and
further
 horn their interpersonal skills which are practical in later life. Social service clubs,
for example
, the experiences of striving on manpower and aid funds to lead a successful project are prominent training other than (
besides
) academic study.
Furthermore
, the connection
build
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 on common interests outside academic competition
last
 longer and become an asset for young adults.
Consequently
,
freindship
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friendship
 and pastime provide
and
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 outlet for
distress
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 of full-time studying and improve
university
students
' well-being.
On the other hand
, joining part-time work related to future career offer profound advantages to
university
 undergraduates (learners).
Students
 in business school
expecially
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especially
, earn not only income but
also
 future connection towards employment and chances to
in-depth
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an in-depth
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 understanding of specific
industy
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industry
. Taking my personal experiences
for
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 instance, working at one of the big four accounting firms during summer and winter breaks, dispelled the glamorous of elite auditors but hard-working and detail-focused professional life.
This
also
result
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 in the recognition of my working performance and leads to employment after graduation. In conclusion,
students
 in
university
 benefits from other activities
in
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 various perspectives.
Therefore
, educators should provide an open
antmosphere
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atmosphere
 in school and foster youngster to
wider
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 range of lifestyles.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

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