Some people claim that immigrants should adopt the local culture when immigrating to a new country. While others think that they can establish a minority community instead. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many individuals argue that there should be

adaptation

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for

immigrants

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who migrate to a new

culture

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. Contrary to

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belief, others oppose that the

immigrants

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should implement their

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as a minority community in a new country. In my opinion,

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establishing a new community can increase the cultural divergence, it can cause a loss of

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structure of the public .The aim of

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essay is to discuss the argument with the merits and the demerits of the debate.

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the one hand, it is important to bear in mind that establishing a minority community can cause an adverse impact on societies,

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immigrants

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should be adapted to the

society

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instead

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of creating a small

culture

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in new countries.

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, many

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people immigrated to Germany as

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. They have implemented their own

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and they have built their

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in Germany

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of following the fabric of

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.

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, some of them still do not know

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language and partially they are not able to find a job outside the

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.

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,

immigrants

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should be adapted to follow

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of conduct.

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the other hand, minor communities can increase cultural divergence and as a consequence people can live

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countries confidentially regardless of gender, race and nation. It can be seen that if a country has

multinational

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society

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structure, more people are respectful

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different

colors

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and their preference.

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immigrants

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are living in Canada and

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, Canada has enforced laws in order to defend every

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fundamental rights and lack of nationalism. In

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way, there is no doubt that more freedom can be provided to societies with respect to minority communities. To summarize, despite the fact that there can be ascending trends in accepting others' rights in multilateral countries,

immigrants

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should adopt the domestic

culture

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so as to be part of the country and

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the demographic

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structure should be preserved.

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essay argued the debate with two sides of the same coin.