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Some people think it is more important to spend time in developing a successful career while others think it is more important to spend time with friends and family. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

#people #time #career #friends
Most
people
 believe that
people
 should utilize their
time
 to improve the future with success wheres some argued that they should give more
time
 to friend and family than focusing on
career
.I do not deny that
people
 should not spend
time
 with loved ones, but giving attention to a successful
career
 is
also
 important. The world has become more challenging than it used to be so
as a result
 nowadays it requires more day to have a successful
career
.sometimes one can miss golden chance from millisecond,
for instance
, you are preparing for an entrance exam to get admission to the reputed university and because of family function you did not perform on well in your exam would slow down your progress.
Secondly
, a successful
career
 means a profession that you love and
also
 a good amount of money which will give you all facilities that you ever want in life. The life with successful achievement needs to quality of
time
. on the other side,some argued that the young generation does not have enough
time
 for their family and friends as they are busy building a quality
career
.To get successful life some
people
 need to travel internationally for either
further
 study or work where they do not get enough
time
 to have a meaningful conversation,
moreover
 some
people
 changed their attitude towards their family and friends when they are becoming a successful person and showing the power of money to their relatives.
For instance
,one who is earning more in the whole family can control overall member. To summarise,
people
 should contribute their
time
 to making a better future by staying with their family and colleagues.
people
 should
also
 maintain their attitude with the achievement they are getting.
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