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Some people say that technologies such as mobile phones are disrupting social interaction. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, a section of society believes that modern technologies like phones, Tv, and social media all these are major dissertation for people not to socialise.In my
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, I completely agree with
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However
,day to day interaction with
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family
families
 has been
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decreases
 no words and time for the society meetings.I shall examine my own view on
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Firstly
,humans are talking with each other
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with in
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within
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the
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mobile phones,
chatings
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chatting
chats
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 apps and social networking websites
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instead
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 of speaking directly.
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, It
become
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 a
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habit
 in their
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.
For example
, In
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 days, people directly go and visit their
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grandparents
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parents
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 house.
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These days
, they are using a wide range of
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technology
 to talk
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with their
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families
family
 who are
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far
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 away from them.
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,people are missing
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physical contact with their friends and
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family
families
.
In addition
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children
children's
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children
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 are getting efforted in long run.
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, no
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proper
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guidelines
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early
 stage parents are allowing them to use gadgets.
For instance
, In their
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childhood
 they willing to hear
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 usually
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 a good sign, but now parents are not giving time to their kids.
Although
, telling them to use
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technology
 to hear
a
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bed time
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 stories. In conclusion,
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daily
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become
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 a
habbit
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habit
 of not speaking with persons directly including families In my opinion, I agree
to
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with
this
,physical touch with in the friends and relatives are completely washed out in the society.
Moreover
, kids are getting efforted in
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