Many people decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it. This, they argue, leads to a more satisfying working life. To what extent do you agree with this view? What other things can people do in order to have a satisfying working life?

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can be achieved by working a 6 hour profession and no call or email out of working hours.
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, many high profile professionals often experience either depression or anxiety due to
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of motivation and
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from their dream
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they are frequently supported by assisting them to grow both professionally and personally. In conclusion,
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focusing on the career goal at
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young and achieving it can make a person happy,
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can be increased even
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by having
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supportive management and colleagues.
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