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In some areas of the US, a "curfew" is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

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Most of the countries all around the world face the challenge of protecting
teenagers
 and these countries take different strategies to make sure the young generation is well protected. United State is
also
 taken necessary precautions to take care of
teenagers
.
As a result
 of that, the government has imposed curfew in some
areas
 of the country and the youngers are not allowed to go out after a particular timeline, especially during nighttime unless, there is an adult accompanied with them. I strongly agree with
this
 law and we should definitely keep our children
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 from the bad society. According to most of the researchers carried out by many institutes, state
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high
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 number of crimes are reported during the nighttime.
Therefore
, limiting the citizen to mobile during nighttime is vital, especially for the
areas
 which have high crime rate. Due to
this
, there is
high
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 risk for
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young people to be a victim of
such
 crime. As an example, there are many incidents where
teenagers
 were bullied and mugged during nighttime when there
traveling
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 along.
Therefore
, it will always better to restrict the people to travel during nighttime unless they have their guardians with them.
This
 way, we will be able to avoid our children to expose to
such
 unpleasant experiences.
On the other hand
, there are situations where the
teenagers
 were used for criminal activities. There are many police records indicate how young people were tricked in to break the law. There are many gangs
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 target
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 and fresh mind and addict them to certain drug and
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 them to conduct crimes. These groups are highly functional during
night
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 time and it is
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, best
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 teenager not to go out without an adult by their sight. To sum up, due to the fact that having curfew during nighttime especially for the
areas
 where identifies as high risk will have
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 impact on the younger generation.
This
 action will allow the parents to look after their children and make sure they will not be
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 and keep them safe from illegal activities.
Therefore
, I completely agree
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 having
such
 lows imposed for the necessary
areas
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enforce
  • juvenile
  • repercussions
  • autonomy
  • adolescence
  • paternalistic
  • delinquency
  • municipality
  • ordinance
  • authoritarian
  • peer pressure
  • social dynamics
  • civil liberties
  • community policing
  • preventative measures
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