Some people believe that today everyone has a right to access the internet and the governments should provide this access for free. Other people believe that access to the internet is not a right and should be paid for like other services. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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INTERNET

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HAS TRULY REVOLUTIONIZED NEARLY EVERY ASPECTS OF OUR LIVES AND FOR THAT, SOME PEOPLE CONCLUDE THAT ITS PROVISION SHOULD BE MADE FREE FOR ALL AT THE

GOVERNMENT

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'S EXPENSE. OTHERS ,

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HOWEVER

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BELIEVE THAT

INTERNET

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CONNECTIVITY IS NOT A RIGHT,

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PAYMENT SHOULD BE SHOULDERED BY ITS USERS. IN

THIS

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ESSAY I WILL DISCUSS BOTH THE GIVEN PERSPECTIVE AND EXPLAIN MY SUPPORT FOR THE LATTER VIEW. THERE ARE SALIENT REASONS WHY THE

INTERNET

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CONNECTION IS CONSIDERED BY SOME A RIGHT.

FIRSTLY

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, COMMUNICATION THESE DAYS ARE CARRIED OUT MAJORLY VIA THE

INTERNET

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HENCE

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THE CREATION OF COUNTLESS SOCIAL MEDIA PLATFORMS LIKE WHATSAPP OR MESSENGER FOR PRIVATE COMMUNICATION TO ZOOM AND WECHAT APPLICATION FOR TELECONFERENCING AMONGST BUSINESSMEN AND THE LIKES.

ADDITIONALLY

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, REMOTE EDUCATION AND WORK-FROM-HOME SERVICES ARE NOW BECOMING MORE APPARENT THROUGH THE USE OF THE

WORLD WIDE

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WORLDWIDE

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WEB. VIRTUAL SHOPPING AS WELL HAS MADE LIFE SIMPLER AND LESS TEDIOUS. AS NEARLY EVERYTHING CAN NOW BE MADE POSSIBLE THROUGH

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WEB, IT IS

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JUST BUT RIGHT FOR THE state TO GIVE public CONNECTIVITY THAT WOULD TREMENDOUSLY IMPROVE THEIR LIVES.

ON THE OTHER HAND

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, ONE CAN LIVE WITHOUT

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INTERNET

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CONNECTION. IT IS ,

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, NOT A NECESSITY TO LIVE. NOT AS ESSENTIAL AS WATER, AIR, FOOD AND HEALTH THAT ASSURES HUMAN EXISTENCE. TO OBLIGATE THE

GOVERNMENT

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TO PAY FOR FREE

INTERNET

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CONNECTION FOR ITS PEOPLE IS AN UTTER DISSIPATION OF TAXPAYER'S MONEY AS THERE ARE OTHER MORE SIGNIFICANT EXPENDITURES FOR THE

GOVERNMENT

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TO SPEND UPON.

SUCH

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AS EDUCATION, HEALTH, AGRICULTURE AND INFRASTRUCTURES. IN MY OPINION, THE IMPORTANCE OF THE

INTERNET

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IN THE MODERN SOCIETY IS UNDENIABLE.

HOWEVER

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, ITS UTILITY IS DESPENSABLE. MEANING, ONE CAN LIVE HEALTHILY WITHOUT

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MODERN INFRASTRUCTURE. WHEREAS, IMPORTANT PUBLIC SECTORS MENTIONED ABOVE NEEDS MORE FUNDING FOR ITS DEVELOPMENT SO THAT THE GENERAL PUBLIC AS A WHOLE

WIOULD

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BE BENEFITTED. TO RECAPITULATE, WHILE THE ESSENTIALITY OF THE "WEB" IS CONSIDERED, HUMAN WILL CONTINUE TO EXIST. MAKING IT FREE FOR PUBLIC USE AT THE EXPENSE OF

GOVERNMENT

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FUNDING IS IMPRACTICAL AS THERE ARE OTHER FAR MORE IMPORTANT SECTORS THAT NEEDS MORE FUNDING TO ASSURE THE WELL-BEING AND EXISTENCE OF ITS PEOPLE.

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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350 words

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Some people believe that today everyone has a right to access the internet and the governments should provide this access for free. Other people believe that access to the internet is not a right and should be paid for like other services. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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