There are severe social consequences to housing shortages in cities and only the government can solve these problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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huge housing shortages in

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of the places to live in and later it will discuss what necessary steps

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scarcity of houses in

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resides there.

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to small houses and high real estate prices which directly impacts

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people's social life.

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they have to live in small places paying high rents with

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could force them to spend more on houses compare to other basic things like food and

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who can help citizens with

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policies regarding the housing allocation and

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prices

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develop the infrastructure in

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but good governance can solve

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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