There are severe social consequences to housing shortages in cities and only the government can solve these problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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huge housing shortages in
cities
and
government
can play a big role to solve
this problems
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. Putting the discussion in the wider context that
accommadation
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accommodation
is always a problem in the metro
cities
and has always been debatable. Some
pople
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people
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government
has nothing to do with it , I wholeheartedly believe that
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government
can solve
this
issue.
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this
essay will discuss
about
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what are the social impacts of
scarcity
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the scarcity
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of the places to live in and later it will discuss what necessary steps
system
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can take to overcome
this
problem and
finally
ends with the conclusion. It is true that
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there
are
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scarcity of houses in
clty
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city
which is due to
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number of
population
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the population
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resides there.
This
shortages
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leads
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to small houses and high real estate prices which directly impacts
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the
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people's social life.
For instance
, low earning
laboures
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labourers
have to migrant to the
cities
for the job and
then
they have to live in small places paying high rents with
large
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number of family members.
This
could force them to spend more on houses compare to other basic things like food and
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clothes
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cloths
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.
Next
who can help citizens with
this
dilema
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dilemma
? Its
government
! who can make strict and
efficeint
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efficient
policies regarding the housing allocation and
it
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prices
.
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System
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can
also
develop the infrastructure in
such
a way that small places can
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accommodate
large
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amount of population with all basic
ammenities
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amenities
and in
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reasonable amount. In
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there will be
socail
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social
issues on housing shortages in the
cities
but good governance can solve
this
.
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