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Some people feel that the media influences social behavior, while others feel it simply mirrors it. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.

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Often times it is argued by some
people
 that
social
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the social
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behaviour
 of individuals is influenced by
media
 and contrary to that sometimes it is said to only mirror it. I will be stating in detail from point of view of both arguments.
First
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i
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 will be talking about how much effect
media
 causes on individuals.
Media
 includes newspapers, television, radio and
nowdays
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nowadays
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 very trending social
media
 through the Internet
also
 plays a vital role.
Behaviour
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The behaviour
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 of any human is mostly derived from
the
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apply
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mindset and thinking and so if those factors are compromised so is the
behaviour
. Perspective to various things of a person is observed to change through
media
 very well,
for
example
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 political parties often
tries
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 to promote their agenda and propaganda over the
media
 to have a better reach and as an end goal to acquire more votes. Eventually influencing
behaviour
 by a good margin.
Secondly
,
Media
 is well said to be formed of the
people
 by the
people
. From inventions and discoveries broadcasted by a knowledge and education television channel to a homicide, genocide, and scams delivered by newspapers or any other form of
media
 are nothing but an exact replica of human's own activities. Many times it creates awareness to
people
 towards dangers but it can
also
 go negatively. Anyways even if
media
 only delivers
human based
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 actions and surrounding it can very well manipulate
mindset
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the mindset
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 of observers and consumers. In conclusion.
media
 remarkably influences social
behaviour
 compared to only reflecting
behaviour
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the behaviour
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 of any individuals.
Submitted by Aditya Mehta on

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