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Stores should sell local food products and not the imported food products. Do you agree or disagree?

Food
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items
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 are the prime concern for people while visiting grocery stores. I strongly agree with the notion that shops should sell local eatables concerning its positive impacts on
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economy
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the economy
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 and
secondly
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 other attributes associated with
food
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 products
such
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 as price and lesser shelf
life
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 as compared to imported products which are indispensable while purchasing
such
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items
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 followed by a reasoned conclusion. To start with,
food
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 is the basic necessity of
life
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 and people spend almost 30% of their income on
consumption
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the consumption
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 of
food
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. According to empirical research by
Revenue
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the Revenue
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 Board of Pakistan revealed that if local
food
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 consumption increases, the revenue generated from the sale can be ploughed back
in
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economy
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the economy
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.
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,
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economy
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the economy
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 will flourish and other sectors and infrastructure will improve
with
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 tandem.
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, stores should only sell and promote local
food
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 commodities and local manufacturers so income generated will rotate within the nation which would foster economic growth. Another insight that must not be neglected, the characteristics of
food
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items
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 specifically shelf
life
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, transportation guidelines, and expiry date.
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, recent news broadcast on Pakistan news channels,
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sad demise of 2 children due to consumption of imported
food
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 from a restaurant. Initial investigation report confirmed that though,
product
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the product
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 was not expired but somehow mishandled during transit (might be
exposure
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 to
sun
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the sun
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) causes the growth of bacteria which lead to
expiry
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the expiry
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 of young ones. Consistent with
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 line of thinking, it is agreed that shops must offer local products because there are
less
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 chances of perishing, have greater expiry dates and can transport with
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ease as per instructions. To conclude, shops must sell local
food
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items
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 because it not only promotes
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economy
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the economy
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 but
are
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also
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 effective in terms of shelf
life
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 and transportation. Any negligence in
food
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 purchase can lead to fatal consequences.

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