Task 2: Internet technology means people do not need to travel to foreign countries to understand how others live. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

the issue of whether nowadays
people
do not need to go other places because of the development of technology has been raising a lot of debates. Some might say that internet services have a beneficial effect on the life of
people
such
as they can know everything about the world by searching on Google so that they just stay at home and need not travel anywhere.
On the contrary
, insist on the opinion that it is important to go to different countries because the reality experiences help
people
understand foreign others' lives clearly. Viewing from a general perspective, I personally agree with the former opinion for the following reasons.
To begin
with, in modern life, the crowd expands their knowledge about the other culture of the other places by online devices.
Firstly
, they can save their time if they stay at home and investigate something on the internet.
For example
,for the person who wants to know how Singaporean live and what it looks like, we just text in Google and it gives you results including pictures and videos.
Secondly
, the money will be reduced and they can use it for necessary situations.
For instance
, taking a trip costs so much money to pay for it and if
people
get
this
money for investing they can earn more than before.
Finally
, their health can be protected if they do not travel because the Covid-19 diseases are outbreak and
this
is very dangerous for travelling at
this
time.
On the other hand
, some
people
think that moving to other countries can substantially help them have opportunities to interact with native speakers or try local food or release their pressures. ,
However
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under the complicate of virus corona, it is better if
people
stay at home and watch youtube for relaxing and broaden their horizon In conclusion, tourism contributes to the development of the economy of the nation.
However
, in modern life, with the internet ,the technology we can know all things which we want to with a simple gesture by Google or Youtube.

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