Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favor of them because of their benefits to humanity .Discuss both views and give your opinion

Conducting experiments on
animals
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common these days.
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there are some people who consider
this
is an injustice activity, opponents believe that
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testing is far
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better than killing
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to check the efficacy of any product. In my opinion, these trials can bring more benefits to mankind than mere drawbacks to other creatures. On one hand, different kinds of
animals
have been used to test the efficiency
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of the medical products before which introduce to markets for human use.
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available in the markets is safe to use.
Therefore
, many trials are conducted,
for example
, on Ginny pigs, to see the response of the
animals
to the products. If they passed successfully, the
further
test would carry out on mankind. By doing
this
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the products can be minimized
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a great extent.
On the other hand
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ethical point of view. Killing or inflating pain on
animals
in the name of experiments is unethical since mankind has no special privilege on the earth.
Therefore
, many animal activists fight and speak against
this
scenario.
However
, conducting
trails
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has been not only followed sets of rules and regulations
,
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but ensure that
animals
would experience the least possible amount of pain during the
trails
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.
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,
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world would suffer if administer a brand-new medicine without any prior testing. In conclusion, people have a different opinion on whether it is ethical to use
animals
for testing or not. I firmly consider it is essential to conduct
such
experiments since
this
can save millions of people from deadly disease and side effects
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