what are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy

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household in the world as a source of electricity is increasing nowadays. It has been made possible due to the efforts of some environmental organizations that encourage and educate people about the benefits of
this
alternative source of electricity.
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the advantages and disadvantages of solar
energy
. Many people are patronizing solar
energy
due to its affordability. Once the solar cable or reception has been established in the house, the family will not need to pay their monthly electric bill like how they used to before.
Thus
, it helps them to save money and focus on financing other needs.
In addition
, solar
energy
helps slow the threat of global warming. Since they rely on the
sun
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as a source of
energy
, they
aide
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in reducing the production of greenhouse gases caused by the power plantations.
On the other hand
, solar
energy
also
has some disadvantages.
Firstly
, the payment of establishing the solar receptors is expensive and not everyone can afford the fee.
Secondly
, people cannot rely on solar
energy
alone. There are some places in the world where
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does not shine at its brightest and completely covered by
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clouds.
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, in the Philippines,
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season usually
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for 2 to 3 months and at
this
point
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solar
energy
is quite impossible to utilize. In my conclusion, solar
energy
has
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positive and negative side. It might cost us a bit more in the beginning but in the long run, it can help us save more money as well
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aide
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in preventing the progress of global warming. It might give us free electricity but its availability is always unpredictable. In the end, consumers must think carefully
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side they are willing to take.

Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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