Some people think parents should read or tell stories to children. Others think parents needn’t do that as children can read books or watch TV, movies by themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people argued that there is no need for
parents
to read stories since
children
can help themselves with reading and watching
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videos

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.
Although
I understand that there are
diffifulties
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difficulties

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for busy
parents
, I believe
story telling
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storytelling

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is a great measure to help
children
's development.
First
and foremost, the
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compliance

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of
parents
help preschoolers build their sense of security. It is essential for
children
to feel
secured
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in order to
further
develop other ability towards socialisation.
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babies,
for example
, are proved to have emotional control and communicational problems in their adulthood.
Furthermore
, regular daily schedules,
such
as
bed
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bedtime

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time
stories,
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assist

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young
children
's brain development and reduce the
tense
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from
environment
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the environment

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.
Similarly
,
parents
could better bond
to
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their descendants by spending
time
together reading.
On the other hand
,
eventhough
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even though

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small kids are fond of
vedio
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video

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clips, these media hamper their abilities of imagination and discourage the
stumuli
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stimuli

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of verbal and interpersonal skills. Online free youtube content, which is
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evident

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especially, often created only for catching views' eyes for clicks rather than educational information.
Although
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pupils

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could improve word capacity by reading books themselves, it becomes thorny when young learners forgo their connections with families and lose their motivation of human contact. Generations born with
smart phones
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smartphones

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,
for instance
, tend to feel alone and isolated than older generations and lead to mental health issues in formative years. In conclusion, despite the
time
saved for
parents
, there is no way of merits to
leave
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young
children
by themselves.
Prerents
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Parents
Presents

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should be aware of the repercussions and share
time
with the young by telling stories.

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