Write a letter to a friend who is looking for a part time job to support his studies. In your letter - Describe the job you found for him/her - Explain why this job is good for him/her - Say what he/she needs to do to get the job
Dear Peter,
I hope you are doing well in a new city. I hope you are doing well in the ongoing semester. I am very glad to hear that you are finding some extra source of income to support your financial requirements during your studies.
Currently, as you know I am working at the Fortis Memorial Research Centre as a full-time clinical physiotherapist.As per my knowledge, you are doing your graduation in hospital management and looking for a vacancy,similar to your course's modules. Surprisingly, there is an opening for an 'Assistant Floor Manager' in a new location of my hospital, which is one mile away from your house.
Furthermore
,this
is a part-time position with a flexible schedule, only 30 hours per week, which means that you are able to concentrate on your studies with your job. The salary is 30 dollars per hour and will be generated biweekly. They will also
provide paid training as well which will help you to understand the working duties.
I would advise you to accept this
offer,a mentioned position of employment will aid you in enhancing your teamwork skills and will enhance your self-confidence,besides
that it is also
a great opportunity to support yourself financially as well.Moreover
, you also
have an undergraduate diploma in leadership and communication, which makes your profile more impressive.
As per the preference of the job posting, you need to submit your updated resume with a letter of reference from your head of department. Please don't forget to attach a cover letter along with
your resume. You also
need to submit the experience letters and employment letters, if you have any.
Wish you the best of luck.Please feel free to contact me at any time if you need my help.I am attaching my resume for your reference.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes,Submitted by Vanurajput22 on
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Coherence & Cohesion
Logical structure: The letter flows relatively well between paragraphs; however, you need to better connect your ideas to create a more seamless progression. Develop each point more fully before transitioning to the next.
Coherence & Cohesion
Greeting and closing: The letter lacks an appropriate salutation and closing. Be mindful to include a 'Dear [Name]' at the beginning and sign off appropriately with 'Yours sincerely' or 'Kind regards,' followed by your name to adhere to letter-writing conventions.
Coherence & Cohesion
Single idea per paragraph: Make sure each paragraph is centered around a single main idea. You can improve this by starting with a topic sentence and elaborating on the idea before moving to the next point.
Task Achievement
Complete response: You addressed all parts of the prompt effectively, providing a description of the job, explaining why it is suitable, and telling the friend what steps to take. Keep focusing on covering all the aspects of the given tasks.
Task Achievement
Suitable writing tone: The tone is generally suitable for a letter to a friend, informal and friendly. Maintain this balance of professionalism and personal touch when writing letters in an informal context.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.