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Trade and travel would be a lot easier with a single, global currency that we all use. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Would a single currency cause any problems?

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It is clear to me that the idea of a single global
currency
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 to work towards. There can be no doubt that trade and travel would be vastly easier.
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 I believe that it would cause
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 today. The benefits of a single
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 can be seen with the use in Europe of
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Euro. Whenever you are travelling between
countries
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 using the Euro, the
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 of
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 changing and exchange rates are history.
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 business between
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 using the Euros is so much easier; no more worrying about exchange rate risk and pricing. Everyone‛s money is the same. The same thing is true with the US dollar. Most
countries
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 do not use the US dollar but it is accepted in many places. There are many
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 that you can travel to and just take US dollars to use. At
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 though a global
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 would be impossible.
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 most
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 would not accept the idea.
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 all
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 are in different economic states. Some are economically very strong and some are in a state of collapse with inflation ruining the economy.
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 could not be brought into a world
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 as it would cause massive financial instability worldwide. So it is clear that a global
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 would indeed cause some serious
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. So, in
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 I see a global
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 as a future ideal but it will not happen in my lifetime. It would make
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 and travel much easier but the
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 it would cause nowadays would be insurmountable.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global currency
  • economic interdependence
  • financial autonomy
  • exchange rate
  • monetary policy
  • economic instability
  • international cooperation
  • economic disparity
  • global transactions
  • implementation challenges
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