Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could better spent elsewhere. To what extend do you agree with this view?

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and that

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can

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on everything else. In my view, the

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play a major role in

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, economy, entertainment and etcetera in

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society;

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, let me disagree with those

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who believe spending

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on the

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means wasting

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. In my opinion, the

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a huge part of

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in any community and if we don’t pay enough attention to the place of the

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in particular

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traditional

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in society,

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will be harmed irreparably downing the road.

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, the

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also

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provide

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with several entertaining activities and has a major impact on

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's well-being and

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issue make the

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worth

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attention

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, in the modern era, the

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has become one of the important parts of

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especially in some advanced countries

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as The United-states.

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, nowadays, cinema has become an industry in many countries,

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Bollywood in India, and directly affect the economy;

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, for making a movie many

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will be involved and they will earn

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in

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way.

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, there are some

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who think the government should not have a particular budget for the

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.

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issue has many harmful aspects;

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, there are many

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who have

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vocation and they will be faced failure if the government doesn’t support the

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and artists. To summarize, remember that the

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a profound effect on

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's daily life;

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, there is a stiff correlation between the

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and

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and they are not separated so financial support is a necessity for the

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.