Despite the benefits for health, fewer people today than ever before exercise by walking. Why is this? What can be done to encourage more walking?
In
this
contemporary era, few individuals
do exercise by walking than back in the days, knowing the fact of health
advantages. There are several reasons for such
situations and also
, few visible influences too. This
essay will showcase both aspects in the following paragraph with relevant examples.
It is not neglectable that, walking has many healt
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health
benefit
it keeps us fit and fine. Change to a plural noun
benefits
Firstly
, as we know in the past, masses walked a lot if we look into ancient days then
there were
no public transport were available, they walked 1000 plus miles within a dayChange the verb form
was
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, as a result,
as a result
they never faced any health
issues. If we talk about mordern
generation, especially sedentary work lifestyle Correct your spelling
modern
then
we have many travel facilities available which lead to health
problems. For example
, individuals
have their own bike and cars so they often use it
, for any reason Correct pronoun usage
them
such
as,
office grocery shopping you name it. Remove the comma
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Besides
, people
travel a lot by using transport hence
they walk less which cause knee pain, back pain as well other health
problems.
Despite knowing the fact of walking people
kept ignoring
. There are numerous solutions to these problems. Correct pronoun usage
itignoring
For instance
, if the government look into these situation
and start Change the determiner
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these situations
awareness
campaign for everyone that Add an article
an awareness
imapct
a lot on Correct your spelling
impact
people
and they might start walking as much as they can. Other than, when individuals
are in the office and they got spare time not too much but they get it, utilise this
time for a
good Remove the article
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health
and walk around that help them to distract from work stress as well. In addition
, advertisement plays a significant role in individuals
life. Apart from, if the regime Add an article
an individuals
the individuals
start
publishing ads related to Change the verb form
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helth
benefits of walking Correct your spelling
health
then
people
would do realise how much important walking is.
To conclude, considering above mentioned point it is evident that, less walking has many drawbacks on health
so we individuals
must have to look into themselves and start walking around near places instead
of using the vehicle.Submitted by ankitacommon on
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