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Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative form of medicine however at best these methods are ineffective and at worst they may be dangerous.to what extent do you agree with this statement.

#trend #alternative #form #medicine #methods
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Nowadays, with the presence of the Internet, people are more aware of what their
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 consists of and the side effects.
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,
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 forms of
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 are becoming more popular among the new generation.
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 some believe that, at best, these methods are ineffective, others believe that, at worst, they may be dangerous. We will discuss both views. I disagree with the statement that these methods are ineffective;
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 forms of
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such
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 as herbal
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, acupuncture, and reflexology can be very effective in some cases. Using herbal
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 for a headache or heartburn could easily take the pain away. It prevents addiction to painkillers, and in the long run,
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 type of
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 could help with the digestive system and everyday stress. Acupuncture or reflexology are the
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 therapies to cure or lessen body pains like a bad back or sour knees. They rarely lead to another disease, which is not the case in some modern medicines.
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, I agree that these types of treatments may be dangerous. As with any other treatment, if done incorrectly, it can be fatal. In some cases, abusing
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 herbal teas has led to internal organs malfunction and other health problems. Using only these methods to treat an acute ailment is ineffective because severe health problems require immediate attention and treatment, and ignoring the signs can lead to more serious issues
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 as cancer. A brain
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 may cause a heavy migraine, and only herbal
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 or acupuncture is not enough.
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, people should listen to their signs and do not take them lightly. In conclusion, because both modern
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 and
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 options target particular medical problems and have their own straights, I believe that they should co-exist. In a way that
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 therapies support modern treatments.
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