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Many people think that fast food companies should not be allowed to advertise while others believed that all companies should have the right to advertise. What is your opinion?

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Nowadays,
advertisement
 is crucial for every field of
products
 or services.
However
, there are some kinds of
products
 which are controversial whether they
is
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are
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 proper to advertise; one of these is fast
food
. Some
citiziens
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citizens
 had a belief that it is not
right
 to present
fast
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fast-food
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food
 ads while others thought that fast
food
also
 had
right
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the right
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 to be advertised. Personally, I am convinced that junk
food
 companies should have the
right
 to present their
products
 due to companies' rights,
customers
'
freedom
, and economy.
Firstly
, fast
food
 brands have their own rights to show their
products
. In the world of
advertisement
,
although
 there are some
products
which
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that
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 are not permitted to sell to the public, fast
food
 has
the
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apply
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permission to advertise in the public.
Similarly
, the companies
also
 have their rights to have an ad. So, the
right
 of
fast
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fast-food
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food
 brands to advertise should not be
constrainted
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constrained
constraints
.
Secondly
,
customers
has
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have
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 their
freedom
 to see
advertisement
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an advertisement
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. They should not be limited
what
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to what
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 they are going to engage
.
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in.
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 Fast
food
 is just one of the
food
products
, similar to others.
Moreover
, they have their own
freedom
 to eat what they would like to eat. So, fast
food
advertisement
shoud
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should
 not be unpermitted to
customers
.
Finally
, fast
food
 is one
the
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 lucrative
products
 for countries and malls. When you commute within your city, fast
food
 shops are prevalent. Numerous people's favourite
food
 is fast
food
. It
make
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makes
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 lots of profit to local areas, malls, or countries which have
fast
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fast-food
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food
 shops.
Subsequently
, the economy of those countries will be great. In conclusion, I have a thought that fast
food
 firms should have the
right
 to present their fast
food
 to the public. It is
beacuse
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because
 of the
customers
'
freedom
, profit, and brands'
right
.
Lastly
,
customers
 should consider what they are going to buy.
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