Some people believe that it is a good idea to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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a good
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other
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the other
people
trust that it is good if we should not share
the details
which is
more accurate and valuable information Change the verb form
are
such
as credit, debit card details
. In my opinion, I accept with second
point which we don't Change the article
the second
share
data
and which is significant to us.
These days various sector people
need the details
for different purposes like business people
need
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to need
data
and give more flexibility to consumer, scientific research needs to collect the data
of person
to check whether they are eligible or not for respective experiments and Add an article
the person
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needs to promote higher levels. Correct your spelling
education
for instance
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media before Change preposition
on social
facebook
and it got faded out by customers due to couldn't reach customer expectations.Change the capitalization
Facebook
However
, several social media sites which are trending now applied artificial intelligence on data
which they have collected and increased customers enormously.therefore
, it is good to share
data
which
makes the human comfortable.
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that
on the other hand
, there are so many security breaches eventhough
corporates are so intense about the Correct your spelling
even though
data
. for example
, some of
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apply
popular
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the popular
celebraties
, politicians twitter accounts hacked by unethical hackers.In Correct your spelling
celebrities
addtion
, some of the business firms intentionally sharing information for their needs like recently Correct your spelling
addition
mobikwik
has put the customer payment Correct your spelling
MobiKwik
details
in dark
web. so these are Add an article
the dark
resons
we could say that we couldn't survive Correct your spelling
reasons
data
.
In conclusion, it will be good to share
information but, on prior we need to look whether we are giving data
to proper
organization or not and at any point we should not Add an article
a proper
the proper
share
any OTP details
which we get to mobile for processing transaction although
we are giving card details
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