Some people believe that it is a good idea to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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people
in society
beleive
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believe
that it is
good
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a good
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notion to pass
data
for scientific, corporate and
education
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purposes. on
other
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part,
people
trust that it is good if we should not
share
the
details
which
is
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are
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more accurate and valuable information
such
as credit, debit card
details
. In my opinion, I accept with
second
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point which we don't
share
data
and which is significant to us. These days various sector
people
need the
details
for different purposes like business
people
need
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to analyze
data
and give more flexibility to consumer, scientific research needs to collect the
data
of
person
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the person
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to check whether they are eligible or not for respective experiments and
eductation
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education
needs to promote higher levels.
for instance
, Orkut was only
social
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on social
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media before
facebook
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Facebook
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and it got faded out by customers due to couldn't reach customer expectations.
However
, several social media sites which are trending now applied artificial intelligence on
data
which they have collected and increased customers enormously.
therefore
, it is good to
share
data
which
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that
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makes the human comfortable.
on the other hand
, there are so many security breaches
eventhough
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even though
corporates are so intense about the
data
.
for example
, some
of
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popular
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the popular
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celebraties
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celebrities
, politicians twitter accounts hacked by unethical hackers.In
addtion
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addition
, some of the business firms intentionally sharing information for their needs like recently
mobikwik
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MobiKwik
has put the customer payment
details
in
dark
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the dark
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web. so these are
resons
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reasons
we could say that we couldn't survive
data
. In conclusion, it will be good to
share
information but, on prior we need to look whether we are giving
data
to
proper
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a proper
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organization or not and at any point we should not
share
any OTP
details
which we get to mobile for processing transaction
although
we are giving card
details
to them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • collaboration
  • accelerates progress
  • innovative discoveries
  • transparency
  • open access
  • verify results
  • fraudulent
  • ethical practices
  • consumer trust
  • potential risk
  • misuse
  • sensitive information
  • genetic data
  • defense-related technologies
  • proprietary information
  • trade secrets
  • competitive edge
  • value
  • investment of time and resources
  • compensation
  • disincentivize
  • recoup costs
  • balanced approach
  • policies and agreements
  • sensitive data
  • fair compensation
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