Some schools have restricted the use of mobile phones. Is this a positive development or a negative one? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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present world, the usage of mobile phone is constantly on the rise. It is undeniable that mobile

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have a myriad of advantage to

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who use it for

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provides negative effects when it is used by

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at school. In

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essay, I will examine my reasons and some examples before the conclusion is reached. The principal reason many people have a positive attitude towards using mobile

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at school is that it allows those teenagers to surf the internet for their

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, mobile

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can provide an efficiency of study to the

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, during the class, if

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require more information about the topic in the class, they can easily look for that knowledge from the internet on their mobile phone.

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, it allows parents to contact their children in an emergency case

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as an accident happens to their relatives.

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, the main reason that supports my negative opinion is that mobile phone could make the

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simply lose their attention in the class. As we can see that mobile

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have a plethora of ability these days,

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as camera or games’ applications,

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, it definitely leads those

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to addicted to it and do bad behaviours during the lesson. In conclusion, it is clearing that mobile

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absolutely give benefits to the

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who use them for their

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, while the

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that use mobile

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for other purposes would get bad effects for their

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. I believe that school ought not to exclude mobile

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, but they should make some rule in order to control

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’ behaviours.

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