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Space exploration costs tax payers’ an exorbitant amount of money each year. What are the advantages and disadvantages of spending money on space exploration?

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Nowadays, many countries are trying to explore outer
space
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 with a large budget and now it is questioning of benefits that can achieve.
This
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 essay will discuss the
benifits
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benefits
 and drawbacks of the result of that task. On the positive side, spending more
money
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 on
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space-exploring
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space exploring
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 will doing innovate and introduce new technology to the world. Countries can achieve more development of their economy and life.
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, after the
second
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 world war America and Russia have spent a lot of
money
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 to send a man to the moon and on that ,
race
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 they had achieved many developments with technology.
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 from the many
centuries
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people
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 are looking for answers about the
mystry
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mystery
 of the universe and these explores will help to solve some of them.
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, governments are allocating more
money
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 from their budget for these
space
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 project can cause less
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 to other main things for their
people
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. Tax
money
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 should spend on
people
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's primary need
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 as health, education, transportation and house, but using a lot of
money
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 for these project
people
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 will be against
to
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their government. By doing explore outer
space
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 will be dangerous for the earth and will cost us life and others.
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, we saw
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 disastrous mission done by NASA and other
space
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 agencies in recent years and lost many astronauts life and billion's worth
assets
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of assets
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 . In conclusion, despite
of
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some disadvantages of
space
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 exploration projects, there are many good achievements received and those help to develop our world prospect.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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