Nowadays, many mothers take care of the family and don’t go out to work. Some believe they should be given salaries by government. Do you agree or disagree?
Every woman must become a mother at some point in her life. Nowadays, some people say that mothers who take care of their families and do not go out for employment should be paid by the government.
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, every mother should make numerous efforts for the good care of her children and family and expect a bright future for both. It is Linking Words
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true that mothers are the best family-keeper. A mom's love for her household is the same regardless of her religion or nationality. Despite Linking Words
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fact, a number of have an abundance of responsibility for their household that they do not have time to participate in any kind of employment. Linking Words
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, women who become part of a joint family after becoming mothers ought to stay home without working outside, sacrificing their careers to support a large family.
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, after becoming a parent, a woman need to manage her present while serving her in-laws in Linking Words
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a way that she can go out and take up a job or occupation according to her qualities and raise her family in a better way. Linking Words
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, well-educated women do not stop working outside even after becoming a parent as it is a hobby of theirs and Linking Words
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helps the household financially and able to manage their whole day considering their younger ones and family members the most essential Linking Words
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, they get an abundance moments to enjoy with their family. Linking Words
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, the regime must invest money in the country welfare Linking Words
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, paying jobless mother to improve the economy.
To conclude, I disagree that women do not go out and work at stay home merely for the sake of being a parent and a responsible family member. Linking Words
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, they need to manage their precious time in Linking Words
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a way that they can lead a happy life with equal attention to both their children and family.Linking Words
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