Demand for food is increasing worldwide. What is the cause of this? What measures can the international community take to meet this demand?

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Food
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consumption is surging all around the world. In
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situation. It is a known fact that the overall population is increasing in number. At the beginning of the
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century
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we were no more than 2 billion people, while nowadays we are almost 9 billion.
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is because the rate of birth far
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the one of death, leading to an inevitable overpopulation. For
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reason
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we will soon have a problem between production and
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consumption
of
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.
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, in the
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decade more and more companies are investing part of their budget to find new ways to produce more
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ad to do it more efficiently.
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are two main options to deal with
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issue.
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, we need to produce more
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secondly
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we need to find solutions to avoid
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it.
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, developed countries should invest more money in vertical farms which will allow us to increase the production of certain kind of products
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as tomatoes and potatoes, without the need
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vast agricultural field which
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already
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scarce
in many countries around the world.
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, we need to minimise the wastage of fresh vegetables or meat.
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, one solution could be a mass media
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campaign
directed to the whole population in order to sensitise people towards a more sustainable way of shopping at the supermarket to be able to reduce the incredible amount of
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that we throw in the bin
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. In conclusion, overpopulation is the main factor that
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to the
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demand for
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,
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every country should take action investing in more technological infrastructures for
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production and marketing strategies to tackle
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concern.
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will lead to a more sustainable world and
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there won't be any
food
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shortage.
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