Sometimes spouses have to live far away from each other. Maintaining a long distance relationship is sometimes difficult and straining. What do you think are the main reasons of long distance relationships? What can be done to help couples feel closer?

Nowadays, some individuals acquire their
friends
far away from their hometown; meanwhile, it will be difficult to be kept in touch with their
friends
and their relationship may face some serious problems.
However
, there are some
people
who prefer to make
friends
from other cities or countries
instead
of share their thoughts with those
people
who are near. In my view, making
connection
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is a must for all
people
and loneliness can lead to several mental illnesses
such
as severe depression; but, whether you can share your ideas with every
people
you face? Absolutely you can't. Often,
people
tend to make conversation with those
people
who have common thoughts and opinion with them;
moreover
, they usually keen on
discuss
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their interests with a person who is fond of their interests or
in other words
,
people
share their emotions with someone who
understand
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them.
Therefore
, if
people
cannot make
friends
among their classmates, colleagues or those individuals who are locally close to them, probably the
long
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distance
relationship may
attracts
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them. In the modern era, fortunately, technology is developing more and more and we are living in an advanced world;
thus
, we should consider those many technological options that are available to make
people
feel closer together.
For instance
, with developing social applications on
smart phones
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and providing couples with some useful services like video call we will be able to improve
long
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distance
relationships certainly;
additionally
, we can develop public transportation among cities and according to that, those
people
who are in
long
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distance
relationships can economize their time and they can make more appointments with their partners. To summarize, sometimes we cannot find our suitable case from
people
around for beginning a relationship but in someone far away from us. Eventually, developing some applications in the virtual environment
besides
improving public transportation can be a helpful hand to contribute
those
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people
who involved in
long
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distance
relationships.
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