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Some people believe that a country becomes more interesting and develops faster when its population includes a mixture of different nationalities and cultures. To what extend do you agree and disagree?

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Multiculturalism makes a stronger bond between the two community. Many
folk
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 think that a nation becomes more interesting and grows faster when
people
 from different states are combining together. I strongly agree with the statement.
This
 essay will discuss valid reason in forthcoming paragraphs.
Firstly
, If in a region
people
 from different
countries
 are living together they respect each other's culture. It brings more convenience to each other. They try to know about different cuisines, dresses,
cultures
 and languages.
For instance
, a survey conducted by "Times news " in which the editor shared,
countries
 with diversities are growing better than those
countries
 who has no
any
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diversity. I believe
people
 from around the world should promote multiculturalism it will help the nation to become more interesting and growing rapidly.
Secondly
, The other reason I think to open borders of the state is
people
 with different
cultures
 has their own
skills
. An individual of a region can learn these
skills
 from other
people
.
For instance
, my cousin visited
last
 year Canada where he learnt many
skills
such
 as art, drawing and painting. It helps him to grow in his own country. Diversity brings two nations together and
also
 make the strongest bond. To conclude, In my
opinion
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 a mixture of different
cultures
 and nationalities makes a stronger relationship between the nations. Which help them to grow faster with creative
skills
. In my prediction
countries
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 these days are accepting the
cultures
 of other
countries
 which is really beneficial for the development of
countries
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural diversity
  • Innovation
  • Multiculturalism
  • Social fabric
  • Heterogeneity
  • Integration
  • Global connections
  • Holistic education
  • National identity
  • Tolerance
  • Heritage
  • Enriches
  • Vibrant
  • Clashes
  • Economic competition
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