You have had a problem with your neighbor for the past few months. You have not been able to meet with your neighbor to discuss the problem. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter: Explain the problem Suggest a solution Say what action you will take if the situation does not improve Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear Alex, I am really so pleased with your
neighbor
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because you are
such
a perfect friend. You are a very understanding person.
Firstly
thank you for
this
. Recently, I think you have been hosting
guests
at your house all the time. I do not care because you are home but the
guests
are very noisy. You know I studying for my exam and my university
so
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hard we are talking about
this
problem. I am very upset because you should be warning your
guests
. I would not care if
this
happened just once but
this
happens almost every day. I am really upset about
this
situation. In my opinion, you should be warm to your
guests
and they do not be noisy. I am really like you. I hope
your
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you
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care about
this
situation. If
this
situation is not a solution I should be
talkingto
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talking to
alandlord
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a landlord
landlord
but I hope we will solve
this
problem among ourselves. Best regards.
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Structure
Consider organizing your paragraphs to focus more clearly on specific points. For instance, dedicate one to explaining the problem, another to suggesting solutions, and a final one for potential actions.
Clarity
Rephrase some sentences for clarity, like 'If this situation is not a solution I should be talkingto alandlord but I hope we will solve this problem among ourselves,' to enhance understanding.
Task Achievement
Add more details about possible solutions or actions you would like your neighbor to take.
Tone
The tone of the letter is polite and considerate, which is suitable for addressing a neighbor.
Task Achievement
You have articulated the problem and a potential solution, maintaining focus on the main issue.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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