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Some universities now offer their courses on the internet so that people can study online. Is it a positive or negative development?

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Today
people
 are beginning to realize that technological developments
allows
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 them to have a comfortable life. Many educational institutions provide
students
 with
a more convenient methods
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a more convenient method
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 of studies by setting online courses.
However
,
this
 essay will discuss why learning online should be avoided according to several problems. It cannot be denied that
students
 tend to have freedom in choosing their study's places.
On the contrary
, their parents need to pay for either expensive devices or network services which may increase the family's expenses in
a
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 long term because they have their lifespan.
Moreover
, studying online can decrease
a
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 quality of learning due to an unstable connection when
people
 take the course at the same period of time. The signal
are
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 equally divided in each house.
Therefore
, they can miss some important sentences.
In contrast
,
leaning
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 onsite tend to force
students
 to pay attention in class.
Furthermore
, teachers can give both knowledge and sociability so children's manners are adjusted and developed by their advisors. In some lesson, the house is not suitable for outdoor activities
such
 as playing
sport
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, doing experiments and dramatic activities. Equally important, studying online can cause
a
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social inequality because
people
 have an unequal financial status. Some areas are difficult to access unless the majority agrees to let these groups of
people
 have less chance to study. In conclusion,
although
people
 are likely to have a wonderful lifestyle by modern technologies. They must have a huge amount of money to support efficient education.
In addition
,
students
 cannot control the signal to flow perfectly. Ultimately, online courses can bring a big issue to
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society.
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